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Need feedback on my game

Posted by Vortex00 - February 15th, 2014

Please download this and give me any constructive feedback

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/ra25ieowcheng5f/XG9B6dJ-IO/UMCC_demo_exe.zip

I am working on a hentai RPG game. If anyone reading this has a bit of time I could use your constructive opinions, thoughts, feedback. there is not a lot of actual hentai in this demo thoguh.

I will be dumping a few smaller demo flash games here that aren't really fit for the portal. So follow me on newgrounds if you want to keep track of that.

if you want to support this game I have started a kickstarter for this here:http://kck.st/1c8mJkm

Lots of information on the game is in this video

also in my kickstarter is a 3D boob mousepad you can grab~!

umcc_mousepad

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TheMajormel 2014-02-15 20:56:34

Does it play like daughters of eve

Vortex00 2014-02-15 20:56:34

Nothing like it

blackiris42 2014-02-15 21:06:25

I'm sort of confused. Will the ability to hook up with all the other characters still remain, or is the focus mainly on leveling up to beat Luma? I mean, I'm happy with it either way, but I kinda need to know what I'm getting myself into.

Vortex00 2014-02-15 21:06:25

It is more focused on beating Luma

JoSilver 2014-02-16 02:34:37

I didn't really play much of it but I certainly Have Huge complaint. The Boob physics... Definitely needs work. Just to ask is it animated or physics based? And I also I have what is in my opinion a better solution, both. I made a softBody class for one of my games which I think produce incredible satisfying result, so much so that, you'd swear it was completely animated.

I used it in this game http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/623584
The boobs, hair and the guys balls use it animate them. If you'd like to use it feel free to ask.

Vortex00 2014-02-16 02:34:37

Thanks for the feedback. All of it is animation. But which are you talking about? all of it? or the pov? or the characters your interact with?
Since you mention class, I would assume is as3, however this game was made in as2 ><

MasterJezzy 2014-03-10 10:02:24

The animation feels weird. Especially boobs, when they bounce for no reason. And males in this game look just like females, which is also kind of weird.
It would be nice to be able to choose answers in dialogues, not only choosing a subject.
Also, the camera is awfully low, when talking. I would place it higher, so the chest can be seen, but not the rest of the body.
And that "sex scene" with David was hilarious. I love how he practically molested her and immediately after that happy music started playing. And the semen on the screen... I couldn't stop laughing.
I think this game has potential, but needs a lot of work.
I'm sorry for my English, I hope you understand everything I'm trying to say.
Keep on working and it's gonna be a good game.

Vortex00 2014-03-10 10:02:24

Thanks I am currently working on this.
Most of the game is designed to be funny and not taken very seriously. The boobs are one of those things. And the always happy music. In fact it is possible that someone in the game even dies and the same music plays right after.

LeHman 2014-03-11 17:55:57

An interesting game, altough i noticed that you can actualy remove your sports clothes outside on the track after running is it intentional ? It would be interesting for her to able to strip at diferent places and admire herself in the mirror maybe at home or in female(male) bathrooms xD. And will there be an demo or posibly an alpha with a bit more things to test out ?

Vortex00 2014-03-11 17:55:57

Good catch there! Yeah I'm actually finishing up the final version currently no need for another demo. I just need to fix a few more bugs.. now including that one.

in her room there are 4 different positions she can be in and you see her in third person. and you also see her in third person at various points in the game.

Need feedback on my game

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